Editor’s eats: Swedish meatballs

The European horsemeat scandal got a little too close to home with the news that Swedish meatballs sold at IKEA stores in Europe were possibly tainted with some off-label, undeclared horsey meat. The stores on this side of the pond were quick to pipe up that their supplier is in the U.S., but with all the recent beef recalls, can it really be trusted?

So it’s back to making my own. Not that I ever really stopped. My late Grandma’s Swedish meatballs blow any processed products out of the water. She always made them for special occasions. Her meatballs are so good that when they were mentioned in her eulogy, the crowd murmured a collective “Yum!”

Recipes are also one of my favourite things to edit, so I am happy to share this special family one. I am lucky enough to have a supply of excellent beef from my uncle’s ranch, and I recommend that you seek out some locally raised and processed beef from your local farmers’ market or butcher for these. I don’t pretend my meatballs are anywhere near as good as Grandma’s, but family members who’ve eaten both say they’re pretty darn close.

Swedish meatballs

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8 New and Necessary Punctuation Marks

The word nerds in my Internet circle were buzzing last week about this College Humor article about eight new punctuation marks we could really use. (I’m always late to the meme party.) If you, like me, would like to actually start using sarcastises and mockwotation marks, you can! Scroll down to the end of the article, and you can download the package and install on your very own computer! Move over and make room, Interrobang!

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The easy way to avoid bias in your writing

I was editing an article recently, and something about it was bugging me. I thought about it and then I realized that it was the word “the” in front of certain words to describe certain groups of people: for example, “the elderly,” “the mentally ill,” etc.

None of these terms are particularly offensive, but by pointing toward these terms with the definite article “the,” a little bit of bias is subtly betrayed. Bias is not necessarily a bad thing; we all have it because we all have a point of view that is informed by our relative position in society and who we consider to be in our in group or out group. (I just used my Anthropology degree there. Yay.) Even if we are careful with the words we choose, a little bit of “the” can make a quality or condition define and group people into the category of being outside of our in group (which in anthropology is called “othering”).

So, look out for “the.” Have you used it to describe a group of people? If you have, consider revising.

For example, instead of ______, choose ______:

  • the elderly  >  elderly people, senior citizens, seniors
  • the mentally ill  >  people with mental illness
  • the disabled  >  people with disabilities

It’s a subtle change, but it puts the person first, rather than the person’s state of being. It may feel a little PC – and who hasn’t gotten frustrated with trying to keep up with changes in preferred terminology that people in our multifaceted society may prefer – and add an extra word or two, but it’s one more way to ensure our words don’t define others by their condition.

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E-books for the ladies of the world

The other day on the train, a woman across the aisle dropped her book, and at a glance, you could tell it was of the 50 Shades genre. As she scrambled to pick it up, I thought, that’s what e-readers are for – keeping your private lady reading private – even in public.

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Thank you and Happy New Year

Will Edit for Food has now ended, but I’d just like to thank everyone who supported the project – whether by tweeting it out, making sure to donate to the local food bank this Christmas season, or by bringing me some editing to do in exchange for a donation!

Together we raised $270 for the Greater Vancouver Food Bank – which will buy about $800 worth of food for hungry people.

Thank you, and have a very Happy New Year in 2013.

Old Style Cash Register and Canned Goods in a Butcher Shop in New Ulm, Minnesota ..., 10/1974

Photo: US National Archives and Records Administration (via Flickr)

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It came from the Internet: the Personal Assistant scam

Some of my favourite jobs have come via Craigslist, but it seems there’s yet another scam for potential jobseekers to be wary of: the Personal Assistant scam. Basically, the scammer advertises a generic sounding job, then sends a response to applicants claiming to be some sort of successful businessperson who is out of the country or what have you, and in need of an assistant to receive payments or packages for them, along with other admin tasks. In another variation, they are “hiring” a caregiver for a relative who is in the local area who needs an apartment or other arrangements set up.

Then, like many scams of this nature, the supposed employer asks for personal and financial information, sends Western Union money transfers to be processed through one’s own bank account, i.e., they send a lot of money and the target is supposed to deduct their cut and send along some other portion, but of course it’s all a big fraud. Here are some other flags to watch for.

I find this an especially insidious twist on the classic Nigerian scam, as it preys not on greed, but on someone’s genuine desire for a job. Not to mention the loss of time it takes to send a resume and prepare that cover letter, which I sincerely hope, if you ever fall prey to this scam, is all it costs you.

 

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OED crowdsourcing redux

Reblogged from West Coast Editor:

The editors of the Oxford English Dictionary want your help in tracing the history of particular English words and phrases.

What’s old is new again. In 1859, the British Philological Society launched an appeal to the British and American public “to assist in collecting the raw materials for the work, these materials consisting of quotations illustrating the use of English words by all writers of all ages and in all senses, each quotation being made on a uniform plan on a half-sheet of notepaper, that they might in due course be arranged and classified alphabetically and by meanings.” The society’s goal was to create a new dictionary “worthy of the English Language and of the present state of Philological Science.” (

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The Oxford English Dictionary was arguably the first example of a work created by "crowdsourcing." As I learned from Simon Winchester's book, the Professor and the Madman, on the relationship between the editor of the OED and one of his most enthusiastic amateur contributors, the dictionary was created through both mass collaboration and meticulous editing. And now, in a major update, they're doing it again. *Dusts off research hat ...
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Will Edit for Food

For donations to the Greater Vancouver Food Bank Society, that is! Because being a starving freelancer is a myth, but 25,000 hungry people (almost half of them children) going to food banks weekly is a reality.

So, for one month (from November 15 to December 15, 2012), I’m offering my editing services in exchange for donations to the food bank. Continue reading

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Tumbleweeds on my blog

The very symbol of neglect, tumbleweeds are rather dramatic in their own way.

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Literacy campaign could use an editor

‘These Are Your Kids on Books’ Poster Goes Viral – GalleyCat.

Though it’s great to promote reading to kids, is it too much to expect that the poster spells the titles of books correctly? If you really love books and reading, you ought to at least proofread and fact-check the titles.

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Decluttering

The consequence of living is accumulating stuff. Papers and brochures and business cards from travels or taking a class or going to a conference. Books and magazines. Little gewgaws and Kinder Surprise toys. Memoribilia, framed photos, ticket stubs, newspapers with my wedding announcement.

Chances are if you ever gave me a card and signed your name on it, I still have it. I save the ones for my husband too, though he doesn’t care about that.

Every once in awhile, usually when I’ve finished a project and need something to do, I try to clean out the excess. I go through boxes and piles, trying to take a hard look at all the physical buildup of memories. I ask myself: the next time I move, do I want to drag this thing with me? Do I want to take this box out of this closet, carry it, put it on a truck, and then put it straight into another closet at the new destination?

It’s hard to get rid of things. Oh sure, I happily shred old bank statements and get rid of instruction manuals and boxes for printers and cell phones that themselves have long since gone to recycling. But anything with sentimental value, anything someone gave me, no matter how ugly, anything attached to any good memory … curse it, why must I hang onto it?

And that’s just the boxes in my own apartment – I still have a load of them at my parents’ house, containing everything from stuffed animals to university papers to a fairly complete set of Sassy magazines. What SHOULD be done with a bunch of 10+ year old textbooks anyway?

That’ll be the topic of my next post – getting rid of the stuff. For now, it’s digging in and deciding what stays and what goes. Decisions must be made. It’s easy to get bogged down. I want to travel lighter, but then I find I can’t quite throw out 10 copies of the 20 extras of my handmade wedding invitations, even though it would be perfectly sensible just to reduce the number of multiples. I wrestle with whether I really should keep copies of classmates’ work from creative writing class, in case someone gets famous. And there’s a magazine I used to like, but never read anymore – why can’t I toss those old copies?

After hours of dealing with detritus from the past, I start having a new sympathy for pathological hoarders. I don’t know if I’ve dealt with the clutter so much as rearranged it and reduced it slightly.

Most of this stuff isn’t worth anything to anyone, except to me. And I don’t think I even want it all. I have a new appreciation for digital photography, ebooks, Netflix, OneNote note taking, and brainstorming, online bills and statements – all things that don’t result in lumpy boxes to deal with. I love getting consumables and experiences as gifts rather than souvenirs from places I’ve never been.

Shredding done, recycling taken out, a garbage bag filled, and a few items set aside to give away, much of the mess goes back in the closet or on the shelves, neatened. I’ll deal with it another day.

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Say Wha?! in New Westminster

Reblogged from SaraBynoe.com:

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I'm super excited to be doing a show in New West's wonderful River Market. I've brought along three of Say Wha?!'s all-star readers who will be sharing two books each for this very fun and packed show. I hope you can join us. If you live outside of Vancouver I'm so glad to finally be coming to you. If you're in Vancouver, it's actually really easy to get to.

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Say Wha is coming to New Westminster. Check out the poster - how can you resist that?
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1 reason to replace paper books with an e-reader

E-books are perfect for bibliophile germophobes. You may miss the old-book smell, random marginalia, and chance of finding somebody’s old photos and grocery list embedded in the pages of a library or used book, but you’ll never have to wonder where your e-book has been.

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Because #nightmarishvisionofaworldgonetohell would be too long of a hashtag

Lady Gaga’s Born This Way Foundation is asking its Twitter followers to tweet their New Year’s resolutions, pledging what they will do this year to “create a #bravenewworldin2012.” I wonder if they happened to notice that Brave New World is a novel about a dystopian future society. Aldous Huxley created a nightmarish vision of constant sex, control and consumption … er … Maybe Lady Gaga’s followers could complete the irony and pledge to dial up some reading comprehension and literacy for 2012.

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Writers who wrote about being poor

… and not about nobly starving for their art, either.

We’ve all seen or read Charles Dickens’ A Christmas Carol. In this classic tale, the wealthy miser Ebenezer Scrooge is shown the worlds of the poor by three spirits, and is especially affected by the glimpse into the life his own underpaid clerk, Bob Crachit, and his son Tiny Tim. In the process, Scrooge becomes a better, more generous man.

Charles Dickens was undoubtedly scarred by experiences with poverty in his own childhood, and his entertaining stories were also sharp weapons for social reform in late Industrial Revolution England. He helped his readers see vividly what it was like to be poor.

Back in the day, poverty was bleak. And things haven’t improved much since. Here in BC, where child poverty rates and costs of living are both sky-high, a member of the provincial legislature (the Opposition party, natch) is spending the month of January trying to live on the welfare rate for a single individual, $610. His name is Jagrup Brar and he’s the MLA for Surrey-Fleetwood – a riding kitty-corner to the notorious Whalley/Central City area of Surrey.

He’s coming in for a hefty dose of criticism for the social experiment, perhaps mainly because of the high salary and pensions for MLAs in BC, which increased by a large percentage in the past few years while minimum wage and social assistance rates stagnated.

He’s hardly the first politician or writer – two professions whose members are usually drawn from the middle class – to journey into the realm of the poor and write about the experience. Some might call this exploitation, accusing writers of sensationalizing or othering (to use an anthropological term) people in poverty. I suspect this criticism is rooted in the fear: 1) that there are, in fact, different social classes, and 2) of trying the same thing.

But however uncomfortable it makes us, reading accounts of living among those of a different social stratum than ourselves makes us more compassionate people, and less judgmental of those whose struggles are different. Three of my favourite works on poverty are:

Down and Out in Paris and London, George Orwell (1933)

While not a biographical account, this book vividly describes the struggles of a young writer working menial jobs in Paris restaurants and being homeless and penniless in London. In the latter part of the book especially, the writer is confounded by the amount of going through the motions one has to do in order to receive charity, how doing such motions prevents him from getting real work, and how being branded an outcast by virtue of being homeless and in receipt of charity prevents him from getting out of cycle of poverty. But, as he famously writes, there is also ” a feeling of relief, almost of pleasure, of knowing yourself at last genuinely down and out. You have have talked so often of going to the dogs – and well, here are the dogs, and you have reached them, and you can stand it.”

Nickel and Dimed coverNickel and Dimed: On (Not) Getting By in America, Barbara Ehrenreich (2001)

The author, an established American writer with a bent for social reform, came up with the idea of leaving her comfy writer’s life and going undercover to see how people actually survive on minimum wage. Spoiler: they don’t. As Ehrenreich finds in stints as a waitress, hotel chambermaid, Walmart clerk and nursing home aide (a minimum wage job in the US), there are no special economies among the poor, and a host of costs, from having to rent by the month at expensive yet rundown motels when you don’t have enough funds for an apartment to having to eat convenience foods and fast food rather than cooking meals due to lacking a kitchen. Not to mention the everyday indignities of being a foot soldier in the minimum wage army – where labour is easily replaced and they don’t let you forget it. Ehrenreich doesn’t leave her writer’s skills behind, however, so this book entertains as it enlightens.

The Door Is Open coverThe Door is Open: Memoir of a Soup Kitchen Volunteer, Bart Campbell (2001)

This book is based on Bart Campbell’s journals of volunteering at a soup kitchen in Vancouver’s Downtown Eastside, an area often called “Canada’s poorest postal code” and known for rundown hotels, dive bars, open drug use … You don’t have to look to find poverty and struggle here, it’s all right there in the open. As Campbell writes about the soup kitchen’s denizens and Brother Tim, the charismatic priest who runs the place, he covers a wide range of topics on life at street level: charity, drugs, prostitution, foster kids, alcoholics, police and prisons, Aboriginal people, flophouses. The stories and diary excerpts provide a window into this world, one that Campbell is aware of being not all that far away. Despite awakening readers to the feeling that there is indeed a system, riddled with good intentions, that keeps the poor in place, he also gives us a glimpse of the community that sustains people when they have little else to live on.

What can be done? I’m not sure but awareness is a start. By reading first-hand accounts, you start to blame people less and start looking at the systems and circumstances that create poverty, from mass layoffs to excessive bureaucracies to attitudes about welfare to bad luck to the simple fact that it takes a lot to swim upward in a downward spiral.

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Amazing! It’s the 2012 Banished Words List

Hey, is that a ginormous baby bump occupying the amazing man cave? It’s not the new normal, it’s a multiple pileup of aurally offensive terms on Lake Superior State University’s annual banished words list.

For the 2012 list of annoying words and phrases, culled from hundreds of suggestions (Oh, I have a few …), visit the Banished Words List. Then make it your New Year’s resolution to avoid cliches and overused buzz words in your writing.

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Madly crushing on McSweeney’s Internet Tendency

First they took us all to task for our font snobbery. Now they’re telling  punctuation bar jokes. Whenever I visit McSweeney’s, I remember why I both hate (why didn’t I think of this? Because I suck!) and love (you’re so clever! Can I write for you?) this website. It kills productivity, sure, but it’s a high fibre source of brain humour. Heh. Heh.

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Associated Press gives the gift of correctness for the holidays

Just in time for the non-denominational gift giving season, the Associated Press has published a style guide for common holiday terms. For example, Santa Claus, St. Nicholas, and Kriss Kringle (yes, two s’s) are all ways to refer to the jolly guy himself. But for whatever reason, “Xmas” as an abbreviation is frowned on upon. Well, merry (lowercase) Christmas to you, then. Love, Xine.

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Movember grumble

When you shave off the first syllable of moustache, it becomes stache, not stash, okay? If you ask me to look at your “stash” I’m going to expect to see coke and gold doubloons, not your hairy lip.

PS Here’s what happens when you tell your Youtuber husband his ‘stache is looking a little grey:

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Shopping locally this Christmas is a gift to the Royal City

Check out my new article on Occupying Christmas by shopping and celebrating locally on New West blog Tenth to the Fraser!

As the Christmas shopping season arrives with Black Friday in the US, I can’t think of anything more ridiculous than camping outside of a store in order to buy stuff. Except for shooting, trampling or pepper-spraying your fellow shoppers in order to get at said stuff, of which there were many reported instances this year.

via Shopping locally this Christmas is a gift to the Royal City.

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